Corpus: Body of Work (blank verse, more or less)
A white-circle light glares through my eyelids, although I shouldnt even be aware its there. Voices susurrate around me, their mandorla of chat peaking at head and foot. The anesthetists alto chords...
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Hey, Brenda ... it's been about forever! It's great to see you and I hope all's well with you there.I don't have time to dive into this one now, but I am definitely looking forward to it. I just...
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Thanks, JaML It's so good to be here. Actually, after the Ezboard meltdown, I checked back regularly for awhile and then decided that maybe the various sites weren't going to survive. My little...
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No nits from me on this one, Brenda! Fantastic fun ... I can see why you had a good time writing it! Outrageously creative and yes, I've been left feeling just like that. (I'm pretty sure I'm...
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Hey Brenda Great to see you here!I think this is fantastically witty and creative. On first read I don't think there's much other than a couple of minor points. However there's a lot of terminology...
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Thanks again, JaML. I usually don't write about writing itself, but there are times when the revision process gets to be so excruciating it's like offering one's body up to the surgical knives! And...
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Brenda -- it's been a great experience reading this one. I absolutely love your metaphors. This has left me smiling ... saying to myself "I know just what you mean." Revision is much like having...
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Snow, it's great to hear from you. Thanks very much for reading this one. I've endured so many rewrite-ectomies, I can certainly take the scalpel to this one if need be. Greetings from NS. My husband...
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Hi, Brenda, hey you were having a larf here, weren't you! I started reading, and my critbot bleeped the sequences for 'Tell!' and 'Prose!' Then I twigged. I enjoyed the fun here, and I know the...
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Hi Steve. Great to hear from you on this oldie. Dangerous ignoring of symptoms, indeed ... certain coteries do this quite regularly, don't they? You mean this isn't self-inflicted? That some poetry...
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